Comments on: Finding Joy http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/ a new yorker's blog Wed, 08 Feb 2012 18:09:35 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Selma http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19239 Wed, 24 Feb 2010 05:22:28 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19239 I love the sparkling mystical feel of this story. It is truly joyful and hopeful.

]]> By: lissa http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19227 Sat, 20 Feb 2010 17:35:53 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19227 @Jay Thurston – thanks for letting me know about the tenses – I’m working on that, still trying to write better, thanks for reading

]]> By: Jay Thurston http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19226 Sat, 20 Feb 2010 17:12:23 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19226 It was enjoyable to read something uplifting for a change. I got caught on a change of tense in this segment…

She drift through the rest of the day in a dream-like state and wished David could be hers.

… but this was a nice read with a fulfilling conclusion!

]]> By: Tumblewords http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19222 Fri, 19 Feb 2010 04:33:51 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19222 Ah, Lissa, this is good – you write such lovely dreamy pieces!

]]> By: Tim Remp http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19221 Thu, 18 Feb 2010 19:44:06 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19221 Well written with a great twist ending. Thank you for sharing :)

-Tim

my 3ww:
http://timremp.blogspot.com/2010/02/within-box.html

]]> By: Frances http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19220 Thu, 18 Feb 2010 19:42:19 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19220 The ending is not lame at all.
I love the part where she watched him as he slept.

]]> By: Dee http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19219 Thu, 18 Feb 2010 12:16:40 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19219 A lovely fairy tale! It was so much fun to discover this today.

]]> By: anthonynorth http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19218 Thu, 18 Feb 2010 10:40:08 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19218 An excellent feelgood story with a great ending.

]]> By: April http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19217 Thu, 18 Feb 2010 01:27:12 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19217 Nice twist at the end there!

]]> By: lissa http://blogjem.com/2010/02/17/finding-joy/#comment-19216 Thu, 18 Feb 2010 01:14:11 +0000 http://blogjem.com/?p=2419#comment-19216 @thomg – actually I am not new to 3ww, I usually post at
http://www.justwritingwords.com/

except for this week, where I am guest posting here, sorry for the misunderstanding

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